Pack Thread Moderation

Subject: Pack Thread Moderation Sun Dec 02, 2012 7:00 pm

Ok i know our thread doesn't interest people much.Here you can post you suggestions how to look the thread.Here is the link: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
Ok here is mine:

Sun Blaze Pack

☼Into the sun hight in the sky one pack watches the world with eagle eyes.

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Welcome!

The pack is found in Sat Oct 13, 2012.Welcome, to Sun Blaze Pack, i'm Karsy the founder.Let me itroduce to the pack.We are a RP plot pack about territory called Sun Blaze Mountain.The pack sees everything through the eyes of the eagles.Currently new pack that is await for you.

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About us

The beauty of the first flight and the winds blowing shows that we aren't a usual pack.We great the sun with howls from this mountain.This is hightest place used for ceremonys and greatings.We could see the life and the deaf the beauty of life.It shows us every thing around.
The pack had to prove that they were really pack so they go through many dificult times.All these time made us a family realated pack with strong builds.The pack was reborn and the long way we have been is one step for a good pack as we are.

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Pack History

Such as other packs we have our history too.Long ago there were two lone wolves they were crossing one unknow for them territory (Sun Blaze Mountain).Then they saw a light ifront of them and they saw an angel wolf who told them that their territory is this mountain)From then the two wolves got there and started a pack they soon had a big territory.And they are plasure to the angel wolf who show them their future and the future of Sun Blaze Pack.

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Rules of the Sun

▲Be respectful to any rank no matter lower or highter.
▲Do not chalenge the Alpha you will get warning or be banned.
▲Rank changes only with the agreement of the Alpha.
▲No fighting or rude behaivior.
▲Respect everyone who post here.
▲Please be patiet and respondsible member.
▲Stay active on the thread.
▲Have fun and enjoy!!!!
▲Follow Wolf Quest rules.
▲No magic and wings this could only be allowed in cotests.
▲Please not go inactive with out posting on the EfA applications or you will get a warning.
▲Please be active and respectful member.

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Pack Symbols

EfA-Excused for adsence
▲-Pack law,rule.
☼-Pack symbol
♀-Female
♂-Male
PMofTM-Pack Member of The Mouth
-Active
□-Semi-Active
-Inactive
~-First warning
~~-Second warning
~~~-Third warning
¢-Banned
♫-Allie
♠-Rival
■-Dominants Trust

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Pack ranks

And ect. i will finish it later post your ideas here.

Subject: Re: Pack Thread Moderation Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:21 pm

Your grammar are kind of wrong. There is supposed to be a space first when you go onto another sentence. And there are some unspaced words too.

Subject: Re: Pack Thread Moderation Mon Dec 03, 2012 5:07 am

When i write i lose some letters.Ok but what should we add to the thread.You can post your ideas here.

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Maybe fixing any spelling mistakes? I see a couple in the thread.

Subject: Re: Pack Thread Moderation Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:55 pm

Yeah, I found a few spelling mistakes too.

Subject: Re: Pack Thread Moderation Sat Mar 30, 2013 12:47 pm

Yes yes i know i'm not good at grammer. But please could some one write and entry text for our thread. It should contain:
1. Date of creation
2. Our history. (You can redact it, as said not good at grammer)
3. Interesting about the pack
4. Use your ideas with these. You can add something if you wish

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